查看完整版本: 第一次作品””愛的甜蜜 & 愛的傷痛 (100%原創!)第2回出左啦!!

第一次作品””愛的甜蜜 & 愛的傷痛 (100%原創!)第2回出左啦!!

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[size=4][color=plum]角色介紹:[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]鄭小瑩(女主角):14歲,15xcm高,一個好成熟[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]既女仔,[/color][/size][size=4][color=#dda0dd]唔算令女,好容易鍾意一個人,但係[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]唔係花[/color][/size][size=4][color=#dda0dd]心同玩玩下果d~比較鍾意傑同vincent,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]但佢[/color][/size][size=4][color=#dda0dd]對傑比較有信心~唔係太鍾意楠~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]but佢知[/color][/size][size=4][color=#dda0dd]楠係對佢最好果個~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd][/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]衛傑:14歲,173cm高,專一,唔煙唔酒,鍾意小熒,對佢溫[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]柔體貼,小瑩梗係鍾意佢啦~佢又咁令仔,佢係[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]3個之中最型果個~~~佢仲好緊張小熒tim~~呢[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]d簡直係超好仔!![/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd][/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]鄺俊軒:14歲,158cm高,好鍾意玩,鍾意小瑩但本身又[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]有個女友,所以就一腳踏2船~不過係真心鍾意小瑩,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]so好矛盾~~佢都ok令仔,仲好可愛tim!!!不過可愛得[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]黎又有少少低能~~=.="[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]陳樹楠:15歲,175cm高,有少少淫蕩,超賤格~~ok令仔,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]唔煙,有時飲酒~~3個之中小瑩最唔鍾意果個~~~但[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]係對小瑩好好,當佢係佢老婆~仲為左小熒同佢ex分[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]手,不過脾氣暴躁~~嬲起上黎cut小瑩線,鬧佢咩麵做[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]得出,但係係真心愛佢~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]陸梓輝:15歲,170cm高,打跆拳超勁~~~超令仔,唔煙[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]有時飲酒~~小瑩識左佢之後,佢就同小瑩一齊~~小瑩[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]同佢痴心一片,但佢就成日去溝女,仲溝呀娟,搞到小瑩[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]好唔開心,但呀娟一d都唔鍾意佢,佢話陸梓輝除左令仔[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]冇咩好形容~~小瑩愛佢就等佢,雖然小瑩期間有鍾意[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]第2個,但佢真係超愛陸梓輝~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]鄭坤林:15歲,170cm高,係黑社會好有料~~ok令仔,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]唔煙,鍾意飲酒~~佢識小瑩第一日就溝小瑩~~雖然[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]小瑩果陣唔係太了解佢,但因為佢d溝女功實在太勁,,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]小瑩比佢迷住左~~佢出面一腳踏十幾歲,晚晚同女仔[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]出街睇戲唱k,,但小瑩一直都唔知~~小瑩亦因為太鍾[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]意佢,所以有諗過放低陸梓輝~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]曾慶麟:15歲,170cm高,讀書好叻~~~ok令仔,超可愛,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]唔煙唔酒,,對小瑩好好,同小瑩有過一段短暫但快樂既[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]戀情,係第一個陪伴小瑩度過生日既男友~~但就唔會[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]係最後同小瑩一齊果個..佢仲好愛小瑩架..真係可憐...[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]佢最愛既人到最後竟然唔選擇佢...............[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]馮浩賢:15歲,170cm高,係教會既人~~~超令仔,好可愛[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]架..係基督徒,但唔係好信基督教~~小瑩係教會識左佢,,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]跟住發覺自己對佢極有好感..而對方亦鍾意自己,,咁就[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]同佢開始左....佢好愛小瑩,小瑩係佢第3個女友,,雖然小瑩[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]拍拖次數多過佢,,但佢唔介意....佢只係一心一意咁對小[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]瑩,超專一呀~~~對小瑩超好~~氹到小瑩好開心,,小瑩[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]特別鍾意佢既天真同陽光氣息,,所以小瑩為左佢放棄所有[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#dda0dd]男仔~~[/color][/size]

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[size=6][color=red]今次打住人物先,有3個留言以就會正式po架啦![/color][/size]
[size=6][color=#ff0000]十卜!十卜!^^[/color][/size]

[[i] 本帖最後由 愛的止痛藥 於 31-1-2008 22:47 編輯 [/i]]

另外加既配角

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[size=4][color=#ff00ff]孔皇娟:小熒既知己,12歲,超單純,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]唔知戀愛係咩,但係爆粗超勁,打交[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]超勁,一出手就打到人訓低~~連自[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]己有冇鍾意既人都唔知~ok令女,過[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]度活躍~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#ff00ff]楊靜雯:10歲,小熒既表妹,好憎小熒,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]鍾意15歲既陳樹楠~唔識爆粗,但又唔[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]係c文,ok活潑~當小熒係情敵,處處針[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#ff00ff]對小熒,但小熒唔知~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#ff00ff]other fds:超憎小熒,個個都13歲~[/color][/size]

冇啦??我好想睇,post

等夠3個人留言先啦~~
多多支持!!

加油,post

我留言~
你快D post la~
我好想睇呀~:Q

" 愛的甜蜜 & 愛的傷痛 "第一回

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[size=4][color=#dda0dd]呢個故事發生喺2007年.....[/color][/size]



[size=4][color=blue](岩岩同個表妹見完陳樹楠,送緊雯返屋企)[/color][/size]

[size=4][color=blue]雯:表姐,幾時至可以再見到樹楠哥哥呀??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:你好想見佢咩??鍾意左人呀??(用d好奸既眼神望住靜雯)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:講真呀,我真係鍾意左佢...>.<"[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:你見過佢一次咋喎,咁快鍾意人??而且佢又成日爆粗....= ="[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:唔覺喎~~佢幾好呀~~係你鍾意佢,唔想我搶走佢je~~(冷淡)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:唔係呀!!我都唔係鍾意佢~~佢咁淫賤,,我點會鍾意佢呀??(無奈=.=)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:佢好淫賤架??咁你又鍾意邊個呀??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:vincent同傑傑我都鍾意,不過咁樣太花心啦~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:比我就會揀傑哥哥啦,佢又夠高大又夠令仔~~vincent哥哥唔係唔好,不過把聲好似[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]     女仔,本身佢自己又矮喎,so呢我勸你揀傑哥哥啦~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:唔好咁話vincent啦,佢唔係唔好架,而且..我2個都咁鍾意~~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:隨你啦,總之我唔會比你搶走樹楠哥哥既~~~(好幼稚咁[嘟]起個嘴)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:得啦,我都話左唔鍾意佢囉,點會搶走佢je?你到啦,洗唔洗我同你上去??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:我自己上去得架啦~係呢,可唔可以比樹楠哥哥個電話我??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:梗係得啦,95128x86呀~~(個電話真架,sor呀出賣左你~~)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]雯:哦,,得啦~~bye bye~~(^_^)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:bye~~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff](離開左雯果度,去左青衣neway同傑傑佢地唱k)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff](去到門口....)[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑:黎左啦?等你好來啦~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:你一直喺度等我呀??sor呀~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑:無所謂啦~~快d入去啦~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑傑拖住小熒,入到去..[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]other fds:woo~~~~接左條女啦??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑:未係住,都要睇下人地肯唔肯至得架~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:唔係我肯唔肯,可能佢有其他更好既選擇~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑:唔知呢~~可能架~~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]fd a:你咁花心架~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑:[男人不壞,女人不愛]呀~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:我都覺~~不過當然唔係[溝女王]果種壞啦~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]fd b:咩唔係好男仔至會有女溝架咩??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]fd a,c:你太天真啦,唔一定所有女仔都係咁,我地就係呢種人~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]熒:係啦,呀娟呢??[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]傑:佢好似未黎~~~我地玩住先啦~~[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]other fds已經玩緊[誠實與大膽],佢地玩得好激.....[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]點激法??下回再續......[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#0000ff]我知作得唔係咁好,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#0000ff]但我會盡力改盡架,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#0000ff]希望之後會作得更好,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#0000ff]我好需要大家既支持架!![/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#0000ff]十卜!十卜!>.<[/color][/size]
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[[i] 本帖最後由 愛的止痛藥 於 25-6-2007 18:33 編輯 [/i]]

作得好好!十卜

thx呀!!!
我會繼續努力架~
不過今次要等5個人留言啦~
你係第一個,
thx呀!!!!^^

我留言,post

好好睇呀~
快d post~
加油!!

仲差兩個人!

:) :) good

好好睇呀~
快d post~
加油!!

加油!!!!!!!!!post

Post啦∼∼:Q
好想睇呀∼∼

d內容好精彩牙,,不過我覺得似你既真人改篇多d xDDD加油.sup u~

" 愛的甜蜜 & 愛的傷痛 "第二回

[size=4][color=darkorchid]第2日........[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#9932cc]話說小瑩係琴晚識左個叫vincent既人,,[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]今日仲去佢屋企玩tim~~~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc][/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:咁快黎左既??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:ok啦~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:入黎先啦~~~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:聽講傑傑一陣都黎wor....[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:係呀..不過都唔知佢幾時補完習..[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:話時話丫,,叫我黎你屋企做咩呀??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:我想你幫我一d野....得ma??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:咩呀??講啦,,幫到就幫..[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:你識唔識design架??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:我淨係識design衫褲果d架咋~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:咁就岩啦..幫我design一套你認為今季會流行既男裝呀~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:無問題~~easy job啦..[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:洗唔洗咁自大呀??(無奈)[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:我講事實姐..功課黎架??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:緊係啦..唔通無無聊聊搵野黎做咩??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:頂你個肺~~串我呀??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:叉你個胃~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:禁你個肚臍機關制呀!![/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:串到wor..咁叻女既??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:唔係..點敢串你呀??vincent哥~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:唔敢當唔敢當~~邊有資格做你大佬呀??瑩姐~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:係咪要design呀??係就快啦.....[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]軒:係係係~~咁你design住先,,我出一出去買野....[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:嗯....[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#9932cc](45分鐘後..........)[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]叮噹....叮噹....[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:黎啦~~傑傑??咁快既??[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]傑:掛住你呀嘛~~[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]瑩:咪玩啦..入黎先啦....[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#9932cc]衛傑同瑩first就黎個深情激吻.........[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=#9932cc]突然,,vincent返左黎..見到呢一幕...........[/color][/size]
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[size=4][color=#9932cc]想睇埋落去就十卜十卜啦~~>.<"[/color][/size]

[[i] 本帖最後由 愛的止痛藥 於 31-1-2008 19:35 編輯 [/i]]

咁短既呢段T^T,,
-333333-!十卜!"

-3-真系好短下,,快d pz XDD好睇牙,究竟去佢屋企做咩呢?真系好想知>3<